This poem is sweet and at the same time hurtfull. i enjoyed reading this poem very much. great job. 5/5

It was sad and i like how your imaginary work though it will look more beautiful if you try to put some rhymes in it...Keep it up

Awhh this reminds me of bobby..grr bobby. but i like it of course. i dont think theres one poem that i dont like of yours. 5/5