Thats relly good

Nice job! 5/5

That was absolutely incredible. The flow was nice. It radiated emotion. It passed a message along in the most incredible way. You point out the flaws of the world that are really there. This is bigger than ones own problems. Truly beautiful. 5/5

A good poem, but the ending wasn't as strong as it could be.

Falling down, some not getting back up
It's crushing all our faith
Be careful what you believe these days
Because we're in the age of hate

Worst stanza, because it stopped the wonderful flow at the beginning of the poem. Otherwise a wonderful poem with a good, if angry, message.

I did love this one, i thought it was really good, and made me think.
well done
love Tara-Kay
xxxxxxx

Ing concrete and breaking stone
Why are so many left all alone?
Nothing lasts forever, these days always fade
But I'm forced to grin and I'm forced to bear the pain

This was my FAVORITE stanza. You write so well. I'm obsessed with you work! lol Keep it up. You've got talent. 5/5