R.I.P Alex

Wow, this is very sad. I don't know anyone who have gone to the war and died, but I did have a friend who was like a brother to me that died almost 2 years ago. I wrote a poem for him, if you want, check it out. I loved this poem so much. 5/5

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This one struck me speak less. I had goose bumps all over my arms. This one is overflowing with emotion, whitch is great. it was so well written that if you just had the words and no emotion, it would still be a wonderful poem. 8/5

This is really good. im soo sorry about Alex but this is a great way to keep his memory alive. keep writing. your really good!

That is so great i really enjoyed that poem very good writing

Ohhh, hailey this is so sad, you portrayed your feelings so well in this poem, it is so beautiful but lonely, could make me cry.
^.^ i hope your doing okay.
*hugs*
5/5
~gabriella