by Espoirfailed Jul 25, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You told me you wouldn't underestimate, but that didn't mean |
by MiZz Nina
This is amazing. In some parts it rhymed and others it didnt but it worked so well together. great job! |
by bethany
Thanks for the comment. i really do love your work! your so creative and inspiring! keep writing. so like, is there a book that has the teachings of buddha that i could look in to??? |
by bethany
Great poem! 5/5! are you buddhist? i noticed your picture on your profile. i think i might be, but i dont know enough about it to consider myself buddhist. i agree with a lot of their teachings, nonetheless.maybe if you are buddhist you can tell me a little more about it. |
I loved it, and tracy was right its flow really is smooth. 5/5 |
by Solus
Sometimes oblivion is all one craves....especially when one is like the person in this poem...... |