SWIM

by Bill   Jul 25, 2007


AM i DESTINED TO SWIM ALONE IN THIS SEA OF GRIEF PEOPLE LIKE TO CALL LIFE?

WILL I SOMEDAY DROWN WHEN UNABLE TO TREAD ANYMORE?

WILL I BE EATEN BY THE FEROCIOUS CREATURES IN THIS OCEAN ?

WILL THESE HUGE WAVES OVERTAKE ME?

OR WILL I SOMEDAY FIND MY ISLAND AND BE AT PEACE.

FOREVER DREAMING ABOUT MY TIME IN THE OCEAN.

REALIZING THAT LIFE IS ABOUT THE SWIM.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThatS anotheR wonderfuL writinG.... keeP uP youR writingS..... mE lovE youR stylE oF writinG verY mucH...

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    Bill,
    This is so true! The notion of finding an island in the ocean. Truly remarkable!
    Keep it up, 5/5

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get the chance, could you please comment and vote on one of my poems?
    Thanks!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    If you only knew how many times I have felt this way! 5/5

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