by Sara Jul 25, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
new love
You smile at me, and make me think I have a chance |
Well I know this poem wasn't about me, but I think you definately found more then a summer fling the day we met :) I'll be here everyday from now until forever...I love you xoxox mwahh |
This may be a lil long but it is really great!!! the ending was not how i thought it would be good job |
This poem is long c[ =.But yet wonderful...You have really amazing work...Loved the ending...The rhyming seem to go good... |
...wow...its ironic i came across this because i actually wrote called "autumn love"...i love the idea behind this poem, lot of emotion behind this piece, amazing work |
by Gasttlee
That was truly a wonder to read! 5/5 |