Wow this is amazing

Good one i like this one

Wow.It was like a diary entry.I really found that I couldn't stop reading it.I've asked myself a lot of questions like the ones in this.Why can't I let go of my past when all it does is bring me heartache?Maybe it's because the future doesn't look that much brighter..I don't know.I really liked this though.5/5^-^

<3Amber

You can =]
(be better i mean)

and i liked this. very truthful..
you presented many questions that I find i ask myself at times too.

Love it 5/5

Awww... yeah its nt a poem but its definitely sad!! i could reach between the lines and feel wat were ya goin through. omg i rele know how it feels!! but yeah at least we control our lives so y lettin our lives control us.
ne wayz good work i loved it. 5/5 of course.

I LOVED THIS ITS WELL WRITTEN ! Thanx so much for the comment! keep writing your good

Wow it was really good!keep it up!

The fog clears and truth is found. Beauty is not or ever the enemy but truth. You are so beautiful Laura...

A most interesting look at your beauty....

Laura, You are a very dear friend ti me, and I wish i could help you and i wish you didn't think this way. I can relate to how you feel, i used to think all the time that I'd be better off if i was just gone...but then one person reach their hand out to me, and let me open myself up to them....and then I felt like I could go on I didn't have to be alone anymore.....so now my dear, sad friend, I reach out my hand to you...
--Evan

Amazing job.
Ver moving & Full of emotion.
Keep up the wonderful job!

Best of wishes
Take care

It was amazing Laura! You know i fell the very same way. I couldn't word my own life better then you worded it. You have great ability to write keep it up.

As Always
Reaper

You are very good at putting your feelings into words and using so much emotion, this sure was sad and it was like an entry in a diary, reading it felt so real and so sad.
love Tara-Kay
x

Really hope this isn't based on any true events...
lol. But yeah you expressed yourself very nicely :)

Wow...this is really good..so long but its like i couldnt take my eyes off of the words...

i love it! every part of it was great.

5/5

We said we will , but as dayz goes on we stick harder to de past , i said i will i said i said i will what i did ? i said i will , i will say i will , and i love the past , it was a bloody sabbath , i wil i will i will i will , all i did , was that said , past love & talkative speed reminds that i said i will , lol sick life , colin wilson said so , if you are not as week as the common pigz , u,ll become an outsider , so we are outsiders ,