hiya!!! i like ur poem! is it based on the book 'a child called it'? coz everything that happened in that poem happened in the book! i think that is really good how u made it into a poem! well dun! xxx

fukin ell darlin dats great.... red da book 2 n yea its sad but u r a wel gd writer so keep it up n smile lol

Cheerz me dearz c ya in drama :D lol

This is a very good poem. you wrte this with such powerful wording and the language use is really really mocing. it flowed well and each stanza was as strong as the first. excellent opening and ending making it a great poem to enjoy start to finish.

well done. amazing work! x