by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex Jul 26, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
This poem is about, well, you make it what you want, but the ending is saying "Hey, I'll do this for you, but you didn't really do anything for me." Basically. =] Enjoy. |
by ABake
As you said everyone will interpret how they want, but the way I looked at it was great. |
by Debbie
Smugness, m'dear. This piece sweltered an intense smugness throughout the page. Yet I didn't particularly feel the sadness. Rather, I felt the subject's haughtiness as a result of its tone of voice. Quite an out of the ordinary way to portray a broken relationship. =] Kudos, Sheena! (^^,) |
Wow. This poem is just dripping with emotion. I loved it. The last line was really good but so were the others. This is really good..and I like what the poem is about.Very Nice!5/5 |