Forever

by Carrie   Jul 26, 2007


Expanding doubt, unlikely chances.
Are you as afraid as i am,
that we're wrong about forever?
I just want to believe,
forget the possibility of the end.
I'll never be that naive.
We've put so much tension in our fear.
Every day is getting harder to bare.
I want to make this work,
because of when we're at our best;
those feelings should last forever.
Then all of a sudden
your doubts, you can't believe.
These words mean
nothing to you,
but everything to me.
Why even bother saying anything
ever, at all,
if you don't think
that you'll be saying them
to me
forever.

(i hate to beg, but please comment.)

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  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLover

    Beg away, lol. First of all, this is sad, sounds like you are going through something in your relationship? If it's about you, that is. It's a good poem, it shows your emotion, gets across what you are trying to say. That's the best part about it, that it conveys your emotion well. Best of luck.