This was a beautiful peice.
The meaning was kind of confusing but to each man his own right? Your flow was good and your choice of words were amazing!
Great job!
5/5
((Amber))

I loved this peice, up until the last line. I guess it's supposed to stand out, but it just seems out of place. Otherwise a good poem and don't mind me lol.

This is kind of a creepy poem! the title was catchy so was the poem!