Ligting Luck.

by Teria   Jul 26, 2007


Lighting Luck.

Your words stick within my heart,
seeping in as I tear apart.
Forever and a day- - promises, oh promises.

Your thoughts linger on my mind,
fading as I slowly find..
I'm unable to cope- - promises, oh promises.

Your lies they find my weakest vein,
and dwell within my horrid pain:
Forever and a day - - promises, oh promises.

Your lies are lies but not for long,
and your words can do nothing wrong,
your thoughts, they help me on my way..
And with lighting luck, it's forever and a day.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Excellent vocab! =) I like the way you repeated "promises, oh promises." Flow was smooth, keep up the good work ^_^

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    I LOVE this poem. In my opinion, it's your best. The rhyme fits and flows and your message is strong although unclear in a its-personal sort of way. It's amazing. 7/5 in my book. I love it all, the first line, the last line, and all the lines between. :)

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