I LOVE this poem. In my opinion, it's your best. The rhyme fits and flows and your message is strong although unclear in a its-personal sort of way. It's amazing. 7/5 in my book. I love it all, the first line, the last line, and all the lines between. :)

Excellent vocab! =) I like the way you repeated "promises, oh promises." Flow was smooth, keep up the good work ^_^