The rhyming was beautiful, i like it alot

"It was so hard to understand
Cause it was my first time
I feel guilty to fall in love
But I didnt do any crime"

this was my best part....true, love is not a crime

Its sad. a poem of loss with little gain. you deserve sum gain i think

When you figure out that someon is never going to be yours, your world end , ..

promiss your heart to let goo.. that is a good one , your heart lsiten to you?
mine dont .. he keep hurting like hell
to remind me of waht i have done to him...

crrying in the rain , it si not enough ... i will make those rains, .. and some storms too ...

the pain is jsut too much
and you exporess it good , i feel you eneded to say more but you could not

simply great