Impossible (Haiku)

by RavishingEruption   Jul 26, 2007


It's impossible
When the moon is shining bright
Not to fall in love.....

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  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    Like it....it is cute and fluffy

  • 16 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Woooooooooooo.
    short poems are the best ones, im too easily distracted to read a long one.
    yours make sense, usually haikus are crap.
    haha.
    good job.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    What those insults say is garbage. This was awsoeme . I loved it. You got haiku talent...

    Sincerly,
    Mello

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    No matter how short this was, it was beautiful. it really is impossible to stare at something so beautiful, and not think of love. it truely makes you wonder and wish and fall.
    as does this haiku.

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jordan

    To be honest...this wasa a bit too straightforward to be a haiku. And, as someone once told me about one of mine - this can't be considered a haiku due to the fact that it's not actually about nature.

    Good effort, though.

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