Why Don't You Like Me?

by Kalee   Jul 26, 2007


As I lie awake
I can't help but wonder why
Why don't you like

Is it because I'm fat?
Or because I'm ugly?
Is it because of the way I look?
Or the way I talk?

I don't know why
But it is eating me inside
As I keep wondering
Why don't you like me

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    Nicely done.
    The flow was good & the emotions were strong. I could feel your self-doubt as I was reading.
    Though, maybe try to improve the vocabulary a little bit, that's the only thing I see wrong. But overall, great job. :]] 5.5

    - Stephanie Lynn .+.

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    This is so sad but what a lot of girls may think! 5/5 this was beautifully done i loved it but it was so sad!

  • 17 years ago

    by Han84

    Hey hun
    yeah its sounds real sad poem... and can tell tht this lad still aint takin no notice of ya.. but hey u cant change yourself for no one so dont love its always the way.. and thing is someone is more than likely thinking tht she doesnt notcie me..

    anway spk soon chin up
    xhx