Hey hun
yeah its sounds real sad poem... and can tell tht this lad still aint takin no notice of ya.. but hey u cant change yourself for no one so dont love its always the way.. and thing is someone is more than likely thinking tht she doesnt notcie me..

anway spk soon chin up
xhx

This is so sad but what a lot of girls may think! 5/5 this was beautifully done i loved it but it was so sad!

Nicely done.
The flow was good & the emotions were strong. I could feel your self-doubt as I was reading.
Though, maybe try to improve the vocabulary a little bit, that's the only thing I see wrong. But overall, great job. :]] 5.5

- Stephanie Lynn .+.