WOW! Great poem. I love your style....it's similar to my own. Great job!
Charisma*

Oh WOW..Oh holy crap...favourite poem of your's so far.

I loved the transistion of melancholy and loneliness to determination and courage, it added for a powerful effect on the overall piece.

Flow was perfect throughout the whole piece and the imagery you portrayed created very vivid pictures for me.

I just...love this. Love it!