What a wonderful tribute. Losing loved ones is the most painful thing we ever have to endure. Their memories stay in our hearts forever. Excellent job on this piece.

Take Care Cindy

"These picture lays scattered", I think it should be [These pictures lay scattered]. Just to let you know. It's no big deal, Ijust wanted to point it out because it's the only mistake I see hear. This was a beautiful piece of poetry. Heartfelt, sad, yet beautiful and full of emotio, it's everything a poem should be.
I'm sorry for your loss too. Absolutely wonderful read! 5/5

marcella

Am awfully sorry for your terrible loss.
This poem was well written, and the flow wasn't perfect but it was sad and a wonderful
tribute for such a special person in your life.
Love always, Tara-Kay
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