Thought i was in love

by Erin   Jul 27, 2007


Before i couldn't trust any other guy
Until you helped me off my feet
So i could finally fly
You helped me threw all this heat
Made me strong to not care what other people think
My days where so much brighter then
I finally had something to look forward to at the end

Ive never met a man like you
You stole my heart and broke it into two
These broken wings of mine
can not fly anymore no longer shine
You made me weak and unable to speak
When you lied and cheated
Not a very good technique
But u did a good job making me defeated
Thinking you were the one
To take away my nightmares from the past
Thinking this was a new begging but i guess it never begun

My wings have been broken
I can no longer fly or shine anymore
Those words i said i wish they were unspoken

*i wrote this for a boy who made me happy. Not my best poem. please vote n comment Please and thank you. I love you F.M*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Kyle

    Wow....this poem was really good. its sad and i could really feel your emotion in the way you wrote it and the words you said. good job. i love it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Demise

    Another poem =),
    I didin't like this one as much as your other recent poems you've done, but it was still good =), I guess I dont really understand the relationship ones as well as others, But I could tell that this poem deffinateally had deep meaning to it, for you, and for that I give you thumbs up =D I always have trouble posting my writeings that are more directly related to me, anyway keep writeing! I know I need to!

    Take care Erin =D

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