Hey sheila!! i think this poem deserves a 3 :( but if you edit the poem and fixit up a litle i woudl reate it a 5.. i think that a poem shoudl either rhyme or not rhyme.. in this poem i htink you made it to rhyme but if you wna tit to rhyme you have to have a pattern liek A and A rhyme and B and B rhyme like

A
B
A
B

see what i mean in this poem you did liek

A
B
A
B
B
A
B
A
B
A
A
A
........

i cant relly explain what i mean lol but i hope u get it <3

Hey sheila!! i think this poem deserves a 3 :( but if you edit the poem and fixit up a litle i woudl reate it a 5.. i think that a poem shoudl either rhyme or not rhyme.. in this poem i htink you made it to rhyme but if you wna tit to rhyme you have to have a pattern liek A and A rhyme and B and B rhyme like

A
B
A
B

see what i mean in this poem you did liek

A
B
A
B
B
A
B
A
B
A
A
A
........

i cant relly explain what i mean lol but i hope u get it <3