by Rose not your average Jul 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Daddy why? |
by Kristina
Wow this poem is so sad, but yet wondefuly written. it flowed really nicely. you have a lot of talent. dont ever stop writing. 5/5 |
Oh wow. When I read this, I felt as if I could relate somewhat...I don't know my real dad. He never cared. And my step dad is worthless to me. I made it this far with a father, I don't need one now. VERY GOOD!!! |
by nikki
Well it was ok. i didn't like the structure, you had long lines and than short lines. try to even out the 2. the rhyming was everywhere. but i thought it was ok. i give you a 4. sorry |
Wow that was very deep and very emotional..It almost made me cry...lol.. |
by Brittany
I think it was amazing how much emotion you put into the poem. It's really admirable that you can put that out into the world. Very brave. |