This is good but... it doesnt seem like it has much emotion, it sounds more forced than felt.. i say it deserves a 3.5 so ill give it a 4 =D <3

This poem is good Is it a true story? i rated it 5/5 :)

I hope this poem is friction 5/5

This poem makes me feel sad and it gives me some sort of a scared emotion. i think you should describe more pain.

Aw was this ture if it wasn't its seem like it was