Another great piece. I like the emotions in this. Very creative. Def. 5/5!

Omg i felt like i was drowning when i was reading it it was soo good.. you really captured the feeling, and i know, because i was trapped in a river with an atv on my head.. i almost died.. you did an aweosme job.. cept i think you have a typo...
instead of feel you lips is it supposed to be feel your lips??
<3

Wow thats really good very sad though
its alot deeper than just ur words

laura