A simple smile

by Rose not your average   Jul 27, 2007


You can see the tears in her eyes,
You know she often cries.
So you give her a smile,
A simple smile.
She stops in her tracks,
Grateful for just a simple smile.
You may never be friends,
But that simple smile,
Changed the way she thought of everything,
Of people.
It changed her.
That simple smile,
Making the person feel cared for.
Not invisible.
She will try and be confident,
Remembering the simple smile.
No words need to be spoken,
Just smile.
You don’t have to be her friend,
Just a reassurance that she is not alone

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and positive poem. Message is good and this piece is simple but still very powerful. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It is a true piece, a simple smile means everything when no words are said. i absolutely loved it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Riley

    It was a bit repetitive a times, but it was cute and I liked it.
    The theme is original too.

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Adorable. Really. It's beautiful how you start this poem so depressed, and make it turn out in such a beautiful piece of work =]! The last lines really finish it too =)
    5/5! =D
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Again, I didn't like the repetition of another word. It was once again, out of place. Well that is just my perception. 4/5

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