I really love this one it is really beautiful. |
by Brittany
This is SO cute. And true too. I honestly think it's a great poem. |
by katy
This is so true a simple smile that someone will give you will make you feel happy all throughout the day i love it when people do that, i loved this part of your poem... |
AWWW cute |
by Fsams
Wow this is great. This piece is really nice and I loved the message in it. Great word choice. Lexically and poetically strong 5/5 |
by ShootingStar
Great.smile is everything: ) |
Again, I didn't like the repetition of another word. It was once again, out of place. Well that is just my perception. 4/5 |
by Birgit
Adorable. Really. It's beautiful how you start this poem so depressed, and make it turn out in such a beautiful piece of work =]! The last lines really finish it too =) |
by Riley
It was a bit repetitive a times, but it was cute and I liked it. |
by nikki
It is a true piece, a simple smile means everything when no words are said. i absolutely loved it. 5/5 |
by Nix
Very unique and positive poem. Message is good and this piece is simple but still very powerful. 5/5 |