Comments : A simple smile

  • 17 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    I really love this one it is really beautiful.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    This is SO cute. And true too. I honestly think it's a great poem.
    Thanks for the cmt :)
    Much appreciated.
    And great work. Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    This is so true a simple smile that someone will give you will make you feel happy all throughout the day i love it when people do that, i loved this part of your poem...

    It changed her.
    That simple smile,
    Making the person feel cared for.
    Not invisible.
    She will try and be confident,
    Remembering the simple smile.
    No words need to be spoken,
    Just smile.

    Amazing :) xx

  • 17 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    AWWW cute
    it is true
    everyone needs a little reasurerance(cant spell)

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Wow this is great. This piece is really nice and I loved the message in it. Great word choice. Lexically and poetically strong 5/5

    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by ShootingStar

    Great.smile is everything: )
    5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Intoxic8dBeautyxXHaNaXx

    Again, I didn't like the repetition of another word. It was once again, out of place. Well that is just my perception. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Birgit

    Adorable. Really. It's beautiful how you start this poem so depressed, and make it turn out in such a beautiful piece of work =]! The last lines really finish it too =)
    5/5! =D
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by Riley

    It was a bit repetitive a times, but it was cute and I liked it.
    The theme is original too.

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    It is a true piece, a simple smile means everything when no words are said. i absolutely loved it. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very unique and positive poem. Message is good and this piece is simple but still very powerful. 5/5