Great job! just fix a few spelling errors. Very nice. Def. 5/5! *thanks for commenting on my piece*

Agrees 5/5

Weee.wish upon the shooting star n dreams come true: )

I love your poem you are a talented writer 5/5 Steve

I love this one a lot. It feels like something that has really happend.

Nice piece, I like how you described such a simple thing so beautifully- then again shooting starts aren't merely simple... Anyway, I like it 5/5

Great poem, I'm not quite sure why but I happen to like the last line "Wishing Upon a Shooting Star" .. Like I said not so sure why=) Keep writing.

Great poem
needs some spell checking but that is all
you wrote it well
has a nice flow
i liked this part majorally
"It was a shooting star,
It fell so far.
Make a wish!"

it was good:):0

Keenan

Such a lovely poem babe i love the part..

It fell so far.
Make a wish!
You close your eyes,
Wishing upon that shooting star

so beautiful :) keep writin and loved ur flow xx

Very creative piece of poetry written for a special event that is how to make a wish seeing a shooting star. Correct the mistakes "suck/such" "that sand/the sand" "look p/look up"

Keep up the good work
you have the potential

It needs a bit of spell checking you might want to check it out. But anyways, I like the poem. I thought it was cute.

You look p in the sky
What does that mean?

Otherwise very good! You have a couple errors though. but yet good

Simple and beautiful. I like the word choice and the flow is good.

It was a shooting star,
It fell so far.
Make a wish!
You close your eyes,
Wishing upon that shooting star

Natural lines I liked them a lot 5/5

Tc

Good job, I like it.
There are some spelling mistakes maybe you can edit, but the poem is lovely.

It was really cute, made me smile. The wording was simple but effective, it had a really good inspirational message within it.
well done
love Tara-Kay
x

Good job. You have a few minor spelling errors, but that doesn't take away from the overall poem. Nice flow.
5/5
Ciao

I agree I saw the few spelling errors but other than that it was awesome. Fast paced flow.

I thought it was pretty good...It could have been more descriptive though...And lines 3 and 10 has some spelling errors..But I liked this it was short and simple...

5/5

Wow. it was done beautifully, a few spelling mistakes but hey, they don't really matter. 5/5

This poem was cute and sweet, although not what I usually like reading. I felt it had no emotion portrayed into this piece what so ever which lets the piece down and the description lacked. I really was hoping you painted a picture in my head. Overall 4/5 for effort on writing a cute piece.