Valley of the shadow of death

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Jul 27, 2007


As i walk through
valley of the shadow
of death i take one
last step with
no regrets

i walk through
the light holding
my head up
high thinking

of why i took my
last breath maybe
i was bad for letting
them hurt me

i tried to move but my
hands and feet were
bind as they bet on who
could go the deepest

i thought maybe its a dream
but the louder i screamed the
more they hit me i begged
and pleaded

please stop only to hear a pop
my neck had snapped i tried to breath
i tried to hold on but it just got colder and colder
the blood gathers

as the police find my battered body
its already to late as i herd them say the time
of death half past 8 i keep going but I'm look
around not knowing

maybe ill find my way or maybe I'm here to stay

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  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Like Coolio much? I liked the meaning behind this poem I felt the emotion which you portrayed was quite deep and heart wrenching. The only thing I think you could improve is your grammer, and structure. Overall an interesting piece which I did enjoy reading. Keep up the good work. ~mel

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    I wont say that this is a bad poem because the flow and the wordings are clear. But there is still room for improvement like correcting the spelling mistakes and adding more rhymes. But I will still give you5/5
    tc
    Fsams

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