by Angela Jul 27, 2007
category :
Fun, humor /
for kids
Once upon a time |
by nikki
I'm not a big fan of dr seuss , but this was a great piece. i loved the way it all came together and sounded so good. wonderful job. 5/5 |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |
by Hayley
Ha nice its a good kids poem!!! keep it up! |
by Liz
Aww haha that's cute! |
by Ixora
Aww what a perfect first poem i really love it...and i think children would to. Great lesson though i think some adults would do well to learn it too ^-* |
by Marie
Dr seuss is da BOMB lol... u did really well with this poem, your rhyme scheme/flow was extremelely well kept and the story fit it well because of it's child-like morale. lol.. i know this will sound wierd but my favorite part is how you used a lime.. I would've never thought a lime.. it's such a unique fruit to use in poetry... like.. most would have said like tomato or something... I love it! |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |