Aww, that's cute! lol how funny! |
by ALEX
Wow.. haha. Yeah. That made me laugh. =D This is a 4/5 for me, just because of grammar mistakes and parts where the flow was off just a smidge. This is super great for a first poem! Good job, and keep writing. |
I feel exactly the same way as he does ^ |
This is so cute! it made me laugh well done few grammer mistakes but it was god |
Hahaha very cute who doesnt like dr. seuss? |
by Tara Kay
Yeah, this was cute. |
by Kaila
Hah cute! I love Dr. Seuss he's amazing isn't he. I think a lot of little kids would love and learn from this story nice work |
And you are a Dr. Seuss expert. ^_^ I loved it. I usually don't like funny poems that much but I enjoyed this one. I just pictured it in my head. :) I gave it a five. Yay! ---->5 |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |
by Marie
Dr seuss is da BOMB lol... u did really well with this poem, your rhyme scheme/flow was extremelely well kept and the story fit it well because of it's child-like morale. lol.. i know this will sound wierd but my favorite part is how you used a lime.. I would've never thought a lime.. it's such a unique fruit to use in poetry... like.. most would have said like tomato or something... I love it! |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |
by Ixora
Aww what a perfect first poem i really love it...and i think children would to. Great lesson though i think some adults would do well to learn it too ^-* |
by Liz
Aww haha that's cute! |
by Hayley
Ha nice its a good kids poem!!! keep it up! |
by nikki
I'm not a big fan of dr seuss , but this was a great piece. i loved the way it all came together and sounded so good. wonderful job. 5/5 |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |