Good bye now

by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX   Jul 27, 2007


I'm putting you away I'm so sorry
you couldn't stay but you left me to cry
wishing i would die but Ive found a
new love

so good bye for now I'm sure
your proud of the filth of your
sins i no longer can depend on
you

You threw me in the trash
So i am putting you in the past
I'm sure you wont be back
i wont even keep
track

you scard me for life even telling
me you wanted me to be your wife
so goodbye for know

maybe shallow hearts need love
but your just the scum beneath my shoes
because you had to choose so I'm trowing you way
like the garbage you are i may be tarnished
but I'm not forever broken

maybe one day you will think of me and choke on
your words so goodbye till the end I'm no
longer gonna sit and pretend so one last time goodbye

forever i was yours once but you broken that trust

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Another great write. it was sad and again the emotion was expressed very nicely. a very well thought out piece and i really liked that last line. :] but these were my favorite lines:

    "maybe shallow hearts need love
    but your just the scum beneath my shoes
    because you had to choose so I'm trowing you way
    like the garbage you are i may be tarnished
    but I'm not forever broken "

    5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by xbxdrfntx

    This is a very good poem i really liked it when i read it
    keep up the goooood work
    bye take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Nice job! it has good reasoning and strong words

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Sad and impressive poem. The reasoning part is great and I loved the great flow and spirit in this piece. Truely beautiful.
    tc
    Fsams

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