Sad and impressive poem. The reasoning part is great and I loved the great flow and spirit in this piece. Truely beautiful.
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Nice job! it has good reasoning and strong words

This is a very good poem i really liked it when i read it
keep up the goooood work
bye take care

Another great write. it was sad and again the emotion was expressed very nicely. a very well thought out piece and i really liked that last line. :] but these were my favorite lines:

"maybe shallow hearts need love
but your just the scum beneath my shoes
because you had to choose so I'm trowing you way
like the garbage you are i may be tarnished
but I'm not forever broken "

5/5.