by Teria Jul 27, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Stripped Bare. |
I really like it. |
This poem was so dark and eery, which I loved. |
I like it. i cant give any critique, but i think you should keep up the good work |
Seems like it could use some more work with the flow. Try not to repeat words too much and try not to force rhyme; otherwise a good read with a good storyline, if you don't mind me calling it that. I'm at a loss for the word I'm thinking of. |