by Brittany
I really like this. And the title too. You have this great talent. Back to the title for a second, I wonder how you chose it. I know there's a line in the poem with it but it's just so...perfect in a way. Anyways, I really love it. |
by Debbie
"And, ignorance is bliss when you don't have a clue," |
Loved it, flawless. another 5/5 from me! |
The last four lines were the best. The poem confused me (but I'm a bit tired at the moment lol) but it was good. If you read it over and change the tense of a few words, maybe take out a few, like the word 'which' in, I think, the third line it would flow a lot better, but with some toying that's easily done. A good poem, I get feelings of anger from it. 4/5, but I'm a harsh rater. |
I really like this. In a way some parts were amusing, and others intriguing. |
by Tara Kay
Brilliant, i really liked the rhyming and the natural effortless flow that you managed to create. |