I don't do it.

by Teria   Jul 27, 2007


I don't do it.

Sheepish little grins lit upon the ceiling,
and I'm wondering what exactly thy God is revealing.
The games he tends to play mess around my head,
as little tiny men dance around my bed.

Some say these things are demons, oh how they're wrong.
They're nothing but shadowed images from this restless song,
the one that never ends and replays in my head,
the one that makes these men dance around my bed.

Oh, the torture that they give with horrid singing voices,
and the problems that they cause with their immature choices.
They've no idea the pain that they cause and the sleep that I lose,
for it's not these tiny things that have the choice to chose.

I think they're quite friendly, not meaning to be rude..
And, I can tell by the way they look that they don't want to dance around nude.
But, it's like they're lost in a world of torture and pain,
and it's like they're being suckered into becoming insane.

I believe thy God is revealing that they're nothing but a mess,
but there's nothing wrong with that, I still have a second guess.
And, I'm not sure what to say, I can hear their solid cries..
I don't do it; Oh, these little men are so good at lies.

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  • 17 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Very interesting, indeed. I'm not quite sure I know what it's about, though. I won't pretend to, either. My idea was that it was either a dream or an illusion, but I'm really not sure. However, that didn't stop me from enjoying it. I found it a deeply interesting write, and I loved the read.

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany

    I agree with the nude line sounding a little forced. Other than that it's really amazing. Such a new concept and idea. I really think you're an amazing writer.
    Awesome job :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Interesting. Again, some of the rhymes a bit forced, especially the part about them not wanting to dance around nude lol. That's just obvious you couldn't find another word to rhyme. But I could be wrong. An interesting poem, love the last line. Not quite sure I get your point, however.

    Oh and check your private messages. :) And do read more of my poems.