Interesting. Again, some of the rhymes a bit forced, especially the part about them not wanting to dance around nude lol. That's just obvious you couldn't find another word to rhyme. But I could be wrong. An interesting poem, love the last line. Not quite sure I get your point, however.

Oh and check your private messages. :) And do read more of my poems.

I agree with the nude line sounding a little forced. Other than that it's really amazing. Such a new concept and idea. I really think you're an amazing writer.
Awesome job :)

Very interesting, indeed. I'm not quite sure I know what it's about, though. I won't pretend to, either. My idea was that it was either a dream or an illusion, but I'm really not sure. However, that didn't stop me from enjoying it. I found it a deeply interesting write, and I loved the read.