Remember Us

by lish   Jul 27, 2007


I just wanted to thank you
for everything you did
although i did not know you
i was just a little kid

you'll forever be my father
no-one will take your place
no matter how hard they try
your memory they wont deface

i only remember you a little
but my memories getting better
i know you'd be so happy for us
Sammy's even started Netta

i picture you up above
sitting on a cloud
if only you could be here
i hope Ive made you proud

i think about you everyday
its just something i do
i wish you could be here
oh father, if only you knew

ill miss you everyday
and miss you every night
for my dearest father
you are my only light

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  • 16 years ago

    by Dawn aka Dominique

    This poem has a very strong emotion behind it and it's very sweet of you to write a poem about your father

    Although The Title?

    Yeah, kinda confused about that how do you get "Remember Us" From this poem

    Who's "US"?

    Sorry if i'm coming off harshly it's just i'm a little confused right now

    If I had to pick a title for this poem I would probably choose the title "TOY" [Thinking Of You]

    You don't have to change it, It was just a thought But you really did great work! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I love this poem. u put you emotions into it well. i loved the ending. excellent job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    That's so sweet... Fathers are the bests... 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    This is so beautiful!! my best friend lost his father when he was little, and i know he would weep if he read this!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Teria

    (:
    It made me want to cry, you've done awonderful job with this poem - amazing emotion and flow. (:

    I'm sorry for your loss, but I'm also glad you feel this way instead of all gah about it. (:
    I'm sure he's proud of you. (:

    memory's*
    capitalizethe I's. (:

    5/5

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