by Vincent Thornsberry Jul 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
My lips yearn for a kiss |
by HaileyHelen
Well for a first poem it was awsomly amazing! ur really good! |
by Blissful
I loved the mood you created in the beginning. It lured me in and made me want more. The love expressed here was one I could relate with. Well done *5/5* |
by Teria
I really really really liked this poem. I think that stanzas would be good for it, but overall you have a great poem going here. |