The Wind

by Vincent Thornsberry   Jul 27, 2007


Ever flowing, ever changing,
I am the wind.
I am unstoppable,
I am restless.
I am warm on a cool day,
and cool on a warm one.
Clear your thoughs,
clear your mind.
Close your eyes and fly with me.
I'll take you where you have not been,
and where you wish to go,
All you have to do
is close your eyes and trust me

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dana

    Not too shabby....it was good it's just that it seemed that I've read it before. or maybe i'm just crazy. who knows...But none the less still good. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    Very powerful and deep. I like the metaphor and idea for this poem. Short but so effective. Atmosphere of this piece is very impressing. I like your choice of words and this poem has special rhythm. Well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Faye Byrem

    Not good at poetry, eh?....NOT. If this is the work of a 'not good' poet, I'm awaiting great things from you, my dear!

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Thoughts**

    Quite amazing, short. It's not my favorite poem, but I really liked it. It's orginal, but not in a bad way, eh.
    Keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Hatori

    I love the topic of wind that you chose! The words were great, the flow was only a little off (that's OK), and your description was superb. One thing that you might want to change is this line:

    Ever flowing, ever changing,

    If you move the second part onto the next line, the top part would be more even. Other than that, great job, and keep it up!

    With all due respect,
    Hatori

    P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and vote one of my poems?
    Thanks!

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