Oh...my...god...Love! I didn't know you had this in you! See? I told you to start writing poetry, this is amazing! You've taken my breath away. God, I love you! Now I can share poetry with you, too! *dances* MWAH! There's a big kiss for my love!

Man.. good job
especially for someone who does not write poetry often.. thats awesome :)
i just joined to.. maybe check out one of mine
and tell me what ya think

I love the topic of wind that you chose! The words were great, the flow was only a little off (that's OK), and your description was superb. One thing that you might want to change is this line:

Ever flowing, ever changing,

If you move the second part onto the next line, the top part would be more even. Other than that, great job, and keep it up!

With all due respect,
Hatori

P.S. If you get a chance, could you please comment and vote one of my poems?
Thanks!

Thoughts**

Quite amazing, short. It's not my favorite poem, but I really liked it. It's orginal, but not in a bad way, eh.
Keep it up.

Not good at poetry, eh?....NOT. If this is the work of a 'not good' poet, I'm awaiting great things from you, my dear!

Very powerful and deep. I like the metaphor and idea for this poem. Short but so effective. Atmosphere of this piece is very impressing. I like your choice of words and this poem has special rhythm. Well done!

Not too shabby....it was good it's just that it seemed that I've read it before. or maybe i'm just crazy. who knows...But none the less still good. 5/5