by Marius Laun Jul 27, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I live each day |
by Lisa
Wow.. |
I cant imagine how work it all out. You are able to make a constant flow while rhyming. I really adored it. 5/5 |
I really like this poem. It has a lot of emotion in it and it kind of reminds me of those old movies when the woman is scared to say they love him and then she says it when he gets ready to leave. but it is an amazing poem. i love it. |
by nikki
The flow was great . the rhyming scheme was a little off but apart from that. nothing was wrong with it. 5/5 |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
I liked the flow of the poem and it had an ok ryming scheme but I agree with Vodka..the last stanza did throw the ryming off a little but all in all it was a good poem.5/5 still |