I Thought I Knew You

by Angela   Jul 27, 2007


How could you
forget to call
and raise me up
to let me fall?

you weren't another passing though
i thought you understood that
when i told you
that i loved you

but here we are
once again
lost in a fight
that never ends

and as i sit here
by the phone
i wonder how you could
leave me here
feeling so lost and all alone

i know where you are
i know you're with her
so i drink some more
until it's all a blur

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

I wrote this poem late at night, while i was waiting for a call from my ex boyfriend. He says he still loves me, but he treats me so differently from when we were going out that i don't believe him. Ive moved really far away from him, and he's already back to liking his ex... but still loving me?? you see before, he would never forget to call me. please vote :)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    All the emotion is here, making it an easy poem to relate to. Your word usage with this one isn't as incredible as the last few poems I read. Still, a great read.

    marcella

  • 17 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    I am really liking the way you finish your poems
    its awesome
    fav lines
    i know where you are
    i know you're with her
    so i drink some more
    until it's all a blur

    keep it up dear
    you really got the poet's qualities shining in you
    try being creative with vocabulary
    thats what i would advice you for future
    this poem speaks a lot
    5/5 for it

    your friend
    Rohan :-D

  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Good poem =D im not sure what to say about the situation tho cuz its never happened to me...so....ya...

    good luck tho

    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Great poem
    Very moving & full of emotion.
    I just think that this verse should be edited:

    you weren't another passing though
    i thought you understood that
    when i told you
    that i loved you

    But it's just my opinion. I may be wrong.. The rest is up to you. Good poem anywayz :)
    4.5/5
    Best of wishes.
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!
    My mom went through the same thing one time [esp. the drinking part]
    and so i can sorta relate!!
    5/5 -Liz

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