Really liked this one im kinda in the same situation as u are with ur ex i kno how u exsaclty feel babe keep writin tho love them xx

We've all been there hun
love this poem!!!
well written and pretty steady flow

Yeah this one is a well writen poem nicely pnd I have to suggest something if you wouldnt mine, put a little more rhyme to it to make it a very powerful piece, to make the emotion flow well, but then overall ill give 5 for this, keep it up,

Gene Ross

Wow great poem love it 5/5 =] keep it up!

* $heila *

Gene, I understand your point. It's quite interesting, but I think I'll have to disagree, well, slightly. Poetry and Verse are two different words. Poetry need not to rhyme, while verses do. You've written it nicely, once again. For such a short piece, you've encompassed so much meaning and feelings already. I admired that tremendously. Well, Jen and the guy were going out. And though I act cool and groovy outside, there's a tinge of pain inside. After all... I'm only human.

Thanks for sharing, m'dear. You captured my heart with this piece. How touching!

Take care,
marian

Gene, I understand your point. It's quite interesting, but I think I'll have to disagree, well, slightly. Poetry and Verse are two different words. Poetry need not to rhyme, while verses do. So, yeah... Peace much. xD

Angela, you've written it nicely! For such a short piece, you've encompassed so much meaning and feelings already. I admired that tremendously.

Well, Jen and the guy were going out. And though I act cool and groovy outside, there's a tinge of pain inside. After all... I'm only human.

Thanks for sharing, m'dear. You captured my heart with this piece. How touching! (sorry for posting twice!lol)

Take care,
marian

THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!
My mom went through the same thing one time [esp. the drinking part]
and so i can sorta relate!!
5/5 -Liz

Great poem
Very moving & full of emotion.
I just think that this verse should be edited:

you weren't another passing though
i thought you understood that
when i told you
that i loved you

But it's just my opinion. I may be wrong.. The rest is up to you. Good poem anywayz :)
4.5/5
Best of wishes.
take care

Good poem =D im not sure what to say about the situation tho cuz its never happened to me...so....ya...

good luck tho

5/5

I am really liking the way you finish your poems
its awesome
fav lines
i know where you are
i know you're with her
so i drink some more
until it's all a blur

keep it up dear
you really got the poet's qualities shining in you
try being creative with vocabulary
thats what i would advice you for future
this poem speaks a lot
5/5 for it

your friend
Rohan :-D

All the emotion is here, making it an easy poem to relate to. Your word usage with this one isn't as incredible as the last few poems I read. Still, a great read.

marcella