Your Love Is Like An Evil

I sord of stumbled on this line, "bringing in these shadows though", it may just be me though lol. Besides that I think it's a wonderful poem. It was nice to see a longer piece from you, that way I could just keep reading your beautiful poetry. Superb write! 5/5

marcella

Nicely done, as always.
Greatly written.
My fav part was:

For its touching and caressing me
just as you once did
but now i feel you're up for sale
and I'm the lowest bid

Loved it. -5/5
Keep it up.

Aha, I really liked the idea of selling your soul to the devil. In other words, which considering the concept of the poem, selling your soul to love is bitter and sweet. Though in a different circumstance, I can thoroughly correlate with this piece. I almost sold my soul, well, to... Love. Ha! Strange, I know. Luckily, I got my sanity back in time. :) Your poetry is groovy, darling. I like how you exploit interesting concepts.

Take care,
Marian

Wow! Normally I am not a Love Poem kind of girl...but I thought this was simply and utterly amazing. The descriptions could have been more intense but it was great just the same. I really think that you have some talent. Keep up the good work!

OOo i like this one! vengufully beautiful ^_^

i especially liked this part:

For its touching and caressing me
just as you once did
but now i feel you're up for sale
and I'm the lowest bid

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