Comments : Your Love Is Like An Evil

  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    Wow, thats pretty good. it sad but it happens just llike that all the time. Even for me resently.

  • 17 years ago

    by katy

    I realllllyyy liked this one and really feel what you are going through this poem touches my heart so much i love it 5/5 xx

    • 10 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you!

  • 17 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I liked this one, i thought it was very well written, and you did a good job.
    well done
    love Tara-Kay
    xxxxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    OOo i like this one! vengufully beautiful ^_^

    i especially liked this part:

    For its touching and caressing me
    just as you once did
    but now i feel you're up for sale
    and I'm the lowest bid

    *^*crow*^*

    • 10 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 17 years ago

    by DepthofPassion

    Wow! Normally I am not a Love Poem kind of girl...but I thought this was simply and utterly amazing. The descriptions could have been more intense but it was great just the same. I really think that you have some talent. Keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Debbie

    Aha, I really liked the idea of selling your soul to the devil. In other words, which considering the concept of the poem, selling your soul to love is bitter and sweet. Though in a different circumstance, I can thoroughly correlate with this piece. I almost sold my soul, well, to... Love. Ha! Strange, I know. Luckily, I got my sanity back in time. :) Your poetry is groovy, darling. I like how you exploit interesting concepts.

    Take care,
    Marian

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    Nicely done, as always.
    Greatly written.
    My fav part was:

    For its touching and caressing me
    just as you once did
    but now i feel you're up for sale
    and I'm the lowest bid

    Loved it. -5/5
    Keep it up.

    • 10 years ago

      by Angela

      Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments!

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I sord of stumbled on this line, "bringing in these shadows though", it may just be me though lol. Besides that I think it's a wonderful poem. It was nice to see a longer piece from you, that way I could just keep reading your beautiful poetry. Superb write! 5/5

    marcella