Wow, thats pretty good. it sad but it happens just llike that all the time. Even for me resently. |
by katy
I realllllyyy liked this one and really feel what you are going through this poem touches my heart so much i love it 5/5 xx |
by Angela
Thank you! |
by Tara Kay
I liked this one, i thought it was very well written, and you did a good job. |
by Ixora
OOo i like this one! vengufully beautiful ^_^ |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |
Wow! Normally I am not a Love Poem kind of girl...but I thought this was simply and utterly amazing. The descriptions could have been more intense but it was great just the same. I really think that you have some talent. Keep up the good work! |
by Debbie
Aha, I really liked the idea of selling your soul to the devil. In other words, which considering the concept of the poem, selling your soul to love is bitter and sweet. Though in a different circumstance, I can thoroughly correlate with this piece. I almost sold my soul, well, to... Love. Ha! Strange, I know. Luckily, I got my sanity back in time. :) Your poetry is groovy, darling. I like how you exploit interesting concepts. |
by Angela
Thanks :) |
by azii
Nicely done, as always. |
by Angela
Thank you so much! So nice to come back and read my old poems and see such nice comments! |
by Cella Bella
I sord of stumbled on this line, "bringing in these shadows though", it may just be me though lol. Besides that I think it's a wonderful poem. It was nice to see a longer piece from you, that way I could just keep reading your beautiful poetry. Superb write! 5/5 |