Heya good job
though you messed up your There's
it should be THEIR lol
but the poem is awesome good job
abd thx for the comment

Keenan

Hmm, I liked this one. I've seen that you're a pretty descriptive writer in awy. That makes it even better =] Once again, keep it up

Uhh no offense but i dont like emo ppl hah i mean i think there too dramatic...but this poems cool nice job

Wow i love this peom great job!keep it up!

* $heila *

I like a lot this poem because you managed to describe the same feelings I had in certain moments of my life.You have done a great work.Congratulations.5/5 For sure Take care of you.Best regards,Michelle XxX PS:10X For the comment >:D<

Ha this is great!!!! ppl consider me emo but i don't like being labeled
lol but this is really good!!!
5/5
laura

THis is a good poem and the word choice is also good. You need to work on this poem to make it better. To start lets correct these mistakes

With all there(their) problems.
They say there(they are) depressed.
Stab through there(their) heart!

Keep writing
Fsams

5/5
when you describe the emo's outwear.you're so true. totally agree wif you: )

Wow..thats like a bundle of emotins cranked up together. n suddenly exploding .. loved it .. i really like the feel of the poem.. well expressed .. Keep up the brilliant work.

~Wake~

I didn't really like the repetition of "emo tear" it was abit out of place but good job though. 4/5

Ooo! its beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it its going on my favs!!!!!!!