She has no feelings none at all
so off to bed this poet goes
never to feel anything but alone

I love that stanza! this poem was really great! i really enjoyed reading it!

Very deep and intense thoughts went into this piece.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy

Another great poem.. This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted. Just a suggestion to use punctuations =)

I agree more puncuation but a good piece :)