Suffocating... <my dReaMS>

by maKinxxxaXXcOMEBaCk WiThxxLoVexx   Jul 27, 2007


Suffocating...
can't breathe...
lungs tighten...
knocked out...
where am I...?
in the grave yard
horrid dreams...

<,,xQuentinX,,>

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  • 17 years ago

    by Good Enough

    I can imagine this poem.. good job!! keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by unblue skye

    Strong words bro... heres meh fav part,
    where am I...?
    in the grave yard
    horrid dreams...
    its really deep at that part and its really cool..
    where am i? in the grave yard... o.o amazing!!!!!

    5/5
    keep it up!! ^_^
    ~*~Skye~*~

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