Comments : Deep is my sorrow

  • 17 years ago

    by XxBrokenInsidexX

    Aww so sweet but in a sad way
    amazing poem
    it had a nice flow!

  • 17 years ago

    by becca

    This is such a beautiful poem! the interesting rhyme pattern gives it depth and flow and works really well to create great effect! keep it up! xXx

  • 15 years ago

    by meganmarie

    Short, sweet, sad. perfect. (:
    i thoroughly enjoyed this piece. keep it up.
    --lovedroughtmelody