by AhmadAfaneh Jul 28, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Here I go ... One more time |
This is a good poem. i like the way it is wrote and the way you express your feelings. i say keep the work up. you are very talented. and i hope to see new work from you. |
by Fsams
Excellent dude, the poem is 99.9% poetic and the wordings are great. The caption and the content is cohesive and the lexis used is coherent. Great write with mournful feelings depicted. I would just suggest you to shorten the 20th sentence. 5/5 all the way |
by Mr M
This type of poem where the writer blames himself is always so well written yet so sad. Sadness like this arises from giving others the power to conduct how we feel...usually the only mistake we make. A good read. |
Hm. Not bad. |
by sara
I can actually feel the sadness of this poem keep it up 5/5 |